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#13835318 Aug 12, 2018 at 01:43 PM
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The torch has been passed. The jungles of Monster Island have a new guardian. And she is nowhere near as friendly as the last one.

All credit to FooRay for this piece.
#13835345 Aug 12, 2018 at 02:37 PM
282 Posts
Daaaaang that's nicely coloured!. The subtle bone-paint, the critter eyes mirroring the leaf-shade, Niiiice! :D

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#13837589 Aug 15, 2018 at 10:44 PM
289 Posts
Ya that's really, really well done.

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#13844570 Aug 26, 2018 at 01:32 AM
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#13844946 Aug 26, 2018 at 01:53 PM
282 Posts
Face shape doesn't match the body type, is also proportionately too small, needs to be at least 1/3 bigger.
Is the band in her hair a headband for the comm unit or an oddly positioned lock of hair? If it's a headband it might need to be recoloured a lighter tawny shade to differentiate it.
Also the way the right leg is positioned it looks like she has masculine torso and that her right shoulder has been terribly crippled. That needs to get shrunk down about 1/4 to show the other bodyparts and that she isn't terribly disfigured.
On the forward foot there is a little snip of blue that's probably supposed to be kicked up dirt or grass- but given it's position in the bone-paint looks like the artist made an oops and didn't fix it.

That said, the foggy distant watercolour background? That looks fabulous! :)

Teleios Clone Mark II: I wish Teleios would create some perfect women. It’s lonely out here!
Snookums! The Snookii! Homicidal Cheerleader! Klepto Elf! Molly!
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